...to bring you eerie/ whimsical foxes frolicking in what appears to be a red, empty diner. (Sandy Skoglund's Fox Games installation at the Denver Art Museum.)
For my major pre-ISTE sightseeing day, I was debating whether to go to the Denver Art Museum or the Museum of Contemporary Art (not to be mistaken for one another).
Then I found out out that the Denver Art Museum building is by Daniel Libeskind, which made my decision for me.
Libeskind designed the Jewish Museum of Berlin, which I visited during my National Endowment for the Humanities Teacher Institute on the Holocaust in 2008.
His spaces force you to interact with the setting, not just the exhibits. There are unexpected angles, nooks, patterns of light. You round a corner and see somewhere you have just been from a completely different perspective.
Even if you can only spend a couple of hours, it's worth the price of admission just to explore the space.
Friday, June 25, 2010
Thursday, June 17, 2010
Free Web Tools vs. Expensive Online Learning Platforms
My district spends what is probably a LOT of money on AngelWeb, which is an online learning platform. Lots of my colleagues adore it. You can use it for quizzes, polls, discussion boards, blogs, bookmarks, etc. I keep going to trainings, keep thinking about using it... and keep not doing it.
Why?
So far, AngelWeb doesn't do those things as well as the free tools I'm already using.
I use Wordpress as my class hub. I can do polls there, or use PollEverywhere during class.
Posterous provides password-protected blogs with personalized themes, and UNBELIEVABLY easy addition of media content. I'll be using it for e-portfolios next year.
Edmodo gives me a private Facebook-like messaging space that I can use for discussions. I can also set up a "fun" group for the "Hey what's up?" chatter.
Diigo provides an easy way for me to do bookmarks. AngelWeb doesn't let me use tags, and with 300+ bookmarks and counting, I need them! With Diigo, my students can also post and annotate links to my class account, which I'll be taking advantage of this year.
Google Docs is my weapon of choice for class files. I'm having a little trouble with students not being able to access public files from some browsers, but I have a "dummy" Google account for kids whose parents are concerned about having them set up their own.
The main area where AngelWeb would come in really handy (and the main reason my colleagues like it) is giving quizzes and tests. You can maintain a huge question bank so that every kid has a different test. That's not something I really need. If I want to do an online quiz, I can use Google Forms. (It's not self-grading, but again, that's not something I need.)
Sure, it's a pain to maintain a bunch of different accounts, and it has taken time for me to introduce and implement these in class, but the extra functionality is worth it.
So why is it that these free tools look better, are easier to manage, and are easier for students to use than the Very Expensive systems so many districts pay for?
Why?
So far, AngelWeb doesn't do those things as well as the free tools I'm already using.
I use Wordpress as my class hub. I can do polls there, or use PollEverywhere during class.
Posterous provides password-protected blogs with personalized themes, and UNBELIEVABLY easy addition of media content. I'll be using it for e-portfolios next year.
Edmodo gives me a private Facebook-like messaging space that I can use for discussions. I can also set up a "fun" group for the "Hey what's up?" chatter.
Diigo provides an easy way for me to do bookmarks. AngelWeb doesn't let me use tags, and with 300+ bookmarks and counting, I need them! With Diigo, my students can also post and annotate links to my class account, which I'll be taking advantage of this year.
Google Docs is my weapon of choice for class files. I'm having a little trouble with students not being able to access public files from some browsers, but I have a "dummy" Google account for kids whose parents are concerned about having them set up their own.
The main area where AngelWeb would come in really handy (and the main reason my colleagues like it) is giving quizzes and tests. You can maintain a huge question bank so that every kid has a different test. That's not something I really need. If I want to do an online quiz, I can use Google Forms. (It's not self-grading, but again, that's not something I need.)
Sure, it's a pain to maintain a bunch of different accounts, and it has taken time for me to introduce and implement these in class, but the extra functionality is worth it.
So why is it that these free tools look better, are easier to manage, and are easier for students to use than the Very Expensive systems so many districts pay for?
Thursday, June 10, 2010
Johns Hopkins/ISTE Certificate Program... Ready, Set, GO!
Last week, I began the orientation for a one-year graduate certificate program in Administration and Supervision through a partnership between Johns Hopkins and ISTE (International Society for Technology and Education). Our face-to-face kick-off is at ISTE 2010 in Denver at the end of the month, and then my cohort will work together all year until our capstone experience at ISTE 2011.
I joined the program for a few reasons. I've become very interested in moving into a technology position, such as a school technology coordinator, or perhaps a district trainer. I checked into a few Ph.D and Ed.D programs. However, the more I have integrated technology into my classroom, and the more trainings I've done, the more I realize I have to learn.
I'm most hoping to improve in the area of leadership/professional development. As a grade level team leader this year, I've realized that leading teachers is like herding the proverbial cats. Cats with strong opinions and nice loud voices. I hope to gain skills that I can put into practice at my small team leader/occasional trainer role for now, then expand later as I take on new responsibilities.
Although I'm an online course veteran (my Master's degree from the University of South Florida was almost completely online) I can already tell that the JHU/ISTE program will be in a far different league. It's going to take more attention and more collaboration than any online experience I have had so far.
I've blocked out my 60-90 minutes a day for class time (at least for now-- may need to bump that up) and prepared myself to feel like a small fish in a big pond! I'm also gearing up for more chat-based teamwork than I've done in the past, and will be setting up a Skype account to work with teammates.
As a writer, I've got my work cut out for me. My classmates are very articulate, both on discussion boards and chat, and the level of discourse is going to be higher than I'm used to. Even though this makes me nervous, it is also exhilarating to be working with teachers of this caliber.
So... Denver, here we come.
I joined the program for a few reasons. I've become very interested in moving into a technology position, such as a school technology coordinator, or perhaps a district trainer. I checked into a few Ph.D and Ed.D programs. However, the more I have integrated technology into my classroom, and the more trainings I've done, the more I realize I have to learn.
I'm most hoping to improve in the area of leadership/professional development. As a grade level team leader this year, I've realized that leading teachers is like herding the proverbial cats. Cats with strong opinions and nice loud voices. I hope to gain skills that I can put into practice at my small team leader/occasional trainer role for now, then expand later as I take on new responsibilities.
Although I'm an online course veteran (my Master's degree from the University of South Florida was almost completely online) I can already tell that the JHU/ISTE program will be in a far different league. It's going to take more attention and more collaboration than any online experience I have had so far.
I've blocked out my 60-90 minutes a day for class time (at least for now-- may need to bump that up) and prepared myself to feel like a small fish in a big pond! I'm also gearing up for more chat-based teamwork than I've done in the past, and will be setting up a Skype account to work with teammates.
As a writer, I've got my work cut out for me. My classmates are very articulate, both on discussion boards and chat, and the level of discourse is going to be higher than I'm used to. Even though this makes me nervous, it is also exhilarating to be working with teachers of this caliber.
So... Denver, here we come.
Wednesday, May 19, 2010
WallWisher for a Reading Review
I read about WallWisher a couple of months ago on Free Tech for Teachers. WallWisher allows you to set up a quick "wall," to which users can add "sticky notes." No sign-in needed, and the creator can moderate before allowing a note to appear.
I hadn't figured out a good way to incorporate it into a lesson yet. I was overthinking! It's perfect for a quick review. Yesterday, I was introducing a lesson on Australia, and I needed to review some background reading that they had done for homework. I set up a Facts about Australia WallWisher, and had student groups of 4 work on adding facts they remembered from the reading using laptops. I set a timer, so there was a great sense of urgency as each group tried to get a fact onto the wall before someone else did (I had a "no repeat" requirement).
When the time was up, we did a "List-Group-Label," one of my favorite standby activities for intros and reviews. The listing of facts done already, we moved around the "stickies" on the wall into groups with similar ideas, and gave each category a label. List-Group-Label generally works well with post-its and small groups, but is tougher with the whole class-- lots of little, hard-to-read pieces of paper all over the place. This worked great and provides a record that students can look back at later as a refresher.
With just over 2 weeks left of school, I am planning to use WallWisher for a "This class is about..." wall that this year's students will leave for next year's.
I hadn't figured out a good way to incorporate it into a lesson yet. I was overthinking! It's perfect for a quick review. Yesterday, I was introducing a lesson on Australia, and I needed to review some background reading that they had done for homework. I set up a Facts about Australia WallWisher, and had student groups of 4 work on adding facts they remembered from the reading using laptops. I set a timer, so there was a great sense of urgency as each group tried to get a fact onto the wall before someone else did (I had a "no repeat" requirement).
When the time was up, we did a "List-Group-Label," one of my favorite standby activities for intros and reviews. The listing of facts done already, we moved around the "stickies" on the wall into groups with similar ideas, and gave each category a label. List-Group-Label generally works well with post-its and small groups, but is tougher with the whole class-- lots of little, hard-to-read pieces of paper all over the place. This worked great and provides a record that students can look back at later as a refresher.
With just over 2 weeks left of school, I am planning to use WallWisher for a "This class is about..." wall that this year's students will leave for next year's.
Friday, May 07, 2010
Sim*Sweatshop and "Persuasive" Games
I teach a 3-day lesson on the impact of globalization that focuses on sneaker design, manufacture, and distribution. Pros and cons of free trade are discussed, as well as working conditions in garment factories. Today my students played Sim*Sweatshop, which simulates conditions in a sneaker factory in a developing country.
The "fun" aspect is racing to complete the required 3 shoes in your 12-hour shift (actually 60 seconds, ticking away stressfully). As your shift wears on, you get tired and have to spend some of your hard-earned wages to buy food and drink, or work more slowly. Periodically, you are asked to make decisions, like whether to start a union or work an unpaid overtime shift. The more you play, the more you realize that while you can get by for awhile, there's really no way to "win." The game has a section called "What's the Story?" where the concepts in the game are explained (and sourced, which I appreciate). I realized I need to make sure to use those sections when debriefing so that students are actually getting the point instead of just racing to make shoes.
I have used persuasive games/games for change several times this year, including Oiligarchy, Darfur is Dying, Against All Odds, and Ayiti: The Cost of Life. Some court controversy than others (Oiligarchy is particularly biting in its criticism of Big Oil). These games provide opportunities for media literacy-- does the game have a "point of view" or bias? Is it constructed to predetermine a certain outcome? Did it convince or persuade you to agree with its point of view? Why or why not? (I always stress that it is okay to be persuaded by a good argument!)
Developing a "filter" for media consumption is just as important as learning the "official" curriculum, and I don't see it being taught as much as I would like.
Do you use "persuasive" online games in your classroom? Which ones, and what do you think are best practices when using them?
The "fun" aspect is racing to complete the required 3 shoes in your 12-hour shift (actually 60 seconds, ticking away stressfully). As your shift wears on, you get tired and have to spend some of your hard-earned wages to buy food and drink, or work more slowly. Periodically, you are asked to make decisions, like whether to start a union or work an unpaid overtime shift. The more you play, the more you realize that while you can get by for awhile, there's really no way to "win." The game has a section called "What's the Story?" where the concepts in the game are explained (and sourced, which I appreciate). I realized I need to make sure to use those sections when debriefing so that students are actually getting the point instead of just racing to make shoes.
I have used persuasive games/games for change several times this year, including Oiligarchy, Darfur is Dying, Against All Odds, and Ayiti: The Cost of Life. Some court controversy than others (Oiligarchy is particularly biting in its criticism of Big Oil). These games provide opportunities for media literacy-- does the game have a "point of view" or bias? Is it constructed to predetermine a certain outcome? Did it convince or persuade you to agree with its point of view? Why or why not? (I always stress that it is okay to be persuaded by a good argument!)
Developing a "filter" for media consumption is just as important as learning the "official" curriculum, and I don't see it being taught as much as I would like.
Do you use "persuasive" online games in your classroom? Which ones, and what do you think are best practices when using them?
Monday, May 03, 2010
Working the Backup Plan
In my classroom, I have an ActivBoard (we have them district-wide) and a set of ActivExpressions (won them in a professional development raffle-- best workshop ever).
My ActivBoard projector went kaput on Thursday, and I was assured that it would be fixed by today. Broken projectors are considered "emergencies." Still, this morning 9:15 rolled around with no projector. My lesson for today, concerning population challenges in China, was supposed to include the following:
1) ActivExpression preview quiz (What fraction of the world's population do you think lives in China?)
2) Analysis/discussion of data and photos on the Activboard
3) Research and brief debate on the one child policy
4) ActivExpression survey on whether students agree that the one child policy is a good idea
Note that 1, 2, and 4 were shot without the ActivBoard. Fortunately, I was able to secure a laptop cart for today. I uploaded the images quickly to my class blog so that students could view and discuss them with the laptops. I whipped up a quick version of my quiz and survey on Poll Everywhere. With Poll Everywhere, students can answer by text message or mobile web on phones as well as on the "regular web." This was the first time I had my kids take out their phones during class this year, and they were very excited-- much moreso than when they use the ActivExpressions.
My projector was replaced about halfway through the day, and I switched back to my original plan for the photo discussion, but stuck with Poll Everywhere for the rest of my classes.
So my technology backup plan wound up being... more technology. If I hadn't been able to use the laptops, I could have run some quick copies of the photos, and had the kids hold up sheets of paper with answers for the quiz and survey.
My ActivBoard projector went kaput on Thursday, and I was assured that it would be fixed by today. Broken projectors are considered "emergencies." Still, this morning 9:15 rolled around with no projector. My lesson for today, concerning population challenges in China, was supposed to include the following:
1) ActivExpression preview quiz (What fraction of the world's population do you think lives in China?)
2) Analysis/discussion of data and photos on the Activboard
3) Research and brief debate on the one child policy
4) ActivExpression survey on whether students agree that the one child policy is a good idea
Note that 1, 2, and 4 were shot without the ActivBoard. Fortunately, I was able to secure a laptop cart for today. I uploaded the images quickly to my class blog so that students could view and discuss them with the laptops. I whipped up a quick version of my quiz and survey on Poll Everywhere. With Poll Everywhere, students can answer by text message or mobile web on phones as well as on the "regular web." This was the first time I had my kids take out their phones during class this year, and they were very excited-- much moreso than when they use the ActivExpressions.
My projector was replaced about halfway through the day, and I switched back to my original plan for the photo discussion, but stuck with Poll Everywhere for the rest of my classes.
So my technology backup plan wound up being... more technology. If I hadn't been able to use the laptops, I could have run some quick copies of the photos, and had the kids hold up sheets of paper with answers for the quiz and survey.
Friday, April 16, 2010
My First Prezi
I have played around with Prezi for a couple of months, but finally used it in class today. In my middle school Social Studies class, I teach a Holocaust unit coinciding with my students' reading of The Diary of Anne Frank in Language Arts. My topic today was Ravensbruck, a women's concentration camp in Germany where I visited in 2008. My Prezi, Support and Comfort in Ravensbruck, supplemented our conversation and set up a following analysis of art by Ravensbruck survivors. The Prezi took me about 15 minutes to create (but again, I've done some experimenting previously). Mine is very simple, but there are lots of more complicated visual effects that you can build in.
I love Prezi's intuitiveness on both the creation side and viewing side. Its strength is that it's not locked into a linear structure, but you can still use the "Path" function to create a narrative. I like that you can choose from several color/font schemes, ranging from somber to splashy, so it can be appropriate for almost any content. A Prezi can be used to supplement an in-person lecture or presentation, or it can be designed to BE a self-contained, complete presentation online. Prezi has free educational licenses for teachers and students.
I love Prezi's intuitiveness on both the creation side and viewing side. Its strength is that it's not locked into a linear structure, but you can still use the "Path" function to create a narrative. I like that you can choose from several color/font schemes, ranging from somber to splashy, so it can be appropriate for almost any content. A Prezi can be used to supplement an in-person lecture or presentation, or it can be designed to BE a self-contained, complete presentation online. Prezi has free educational licenses for teachers and students.
Friday, April 09, 2010
Edmodo and Student Collaboration
Each year, the 7th graders at my school do Travel Fair. Each group takes on the role of a travel agency and pitch a visit to an assigned country to the Fair's visitors (other students, teachers, and parents). We take over the entire gym. It's noisy and colorful and chaotic (280 kids this year), and just completely low-tech. And this year, I'm the coordinator. I am slowly attempting to drag Travel Fair into the 21st century. Last year, I emphasized online research-- very web 1.0. This year, I tried to focus a bit more on online collaboration. In the past, Travel Fair groups met at each other's homes. Now our kids are spread out over a large county, and asking parents to cart them all over the place isn't practical.
I set up an account at Edmodo, a private social networking platform for education. It's completely private and it's one of the few social networking sites that isn't blocked by our district. Within Edmodo, I set up one "group" for my entire class, another for each period, and finally one for each country group. In Edmodo, my students can share files, links, and comments with one another.
Here's a screenshot from my 3rd period Jamaica group:
The format is very comfortable for Facebook users, they enjoy being able to social network at school, and it really is handy for group collaboration.
Next goal-- using Edmodo for student assignments.
Thursday, April 01, 2010
Alfie Kohn vs. Dwight Shrute
A great illustration of intristic vs. extrinisic motivation and the idiocy of token-based economies in education. Dwight's apparently a B.F. Skinner fan.
Thursday, February 11, 2010
Wednesday, February 10, 2010
Backchannel Chat with TodaysMeet
I'm working on incorporating more technology tools into my teaching. The Free Technology For Teachers blog has been invaluable-- I find something new to try on a weekly basis, if not more often. Recently I used backchannel chat with TodaysMeet, one of the few sites that can be used for private chat that isn't blocked by my school district. I had the students conduct a chat while viewing a video (Rick Steves' Iran) and learned a few things:
TodaysMeet could be used across classrooms, with multiple classes logging into the same chat room. I'm not secure enough to have students backchannel chat while I'm conducting a lesson at this point. I feel like I need to be able to monitor the chat carefully while it's happening. For in-class video viewing, though, I think it's going to be my new go-to activity.
- Providing a few minutes of "play" time was essential. They were able to get their "OMG THIS IS SO COOL!!1!1!"s out before we started the actual content.
- Also essential: very clear rules about appropriate vs. inappropriate chat. One unforeseen wrinkle was that my students are obviously used to ragging each other while chatting-- I had to add a "No insults" guideline.
- 24 kids + one chat room = chaos. I wound up asking them to restrict themselves to 10 comments during the video.
- An effective teacher pauses video content frequently to process with students. This way, we didn't have to keep pausing, although I did once or twice when the situation warranted it.
- Connected to the above: I had to be much more engaged as a teacher than I generally am during a video. The kids were not only answering the questions I posted on the board, they were asking me how things were spelled, explanations for things they were confused about, etc.
- The kids were also much more engaged. In Kagan Cooperative Learning (the love of my teaching life), teachers are instructed to ask themselves, "What percent of the students are overtly active at once?" A quick scan of the room showed maybe 1/4 to 1/2 of them in the process of typing a response at any given time. They were keeping track of the chat, watching the video, and thinking about their own responses. They most definitely worked harder than the typical video-with-a-worksheet (even more than a really good video with a really good worksheet)-- and they liked it more.
TodaysMeet could be used across classrooms, with multiple classes logging into the same chat room. I'm not secure enough to have students backchannel chat while I'm conducting a lesson at this point. I feel like I need to be able to monitor the chat carefully while it's happening. For in-class video viewing, though, I think it's going to be my new go-to activity.
Thursday, December 31, 2009
Merit Pay, Teacher Pay, and Value Added Measures
This video by Prof. Daniel Willingham describes six problems with value-added merit pay plans.
I am pro-merit pay, or I would be, if someone could figure out a way to do it that actually reflected teacher performance. Even value-added measures don't. (I wish they hadn't used the word "fair" in the video. The issue isn't fairness, it's the VALIDITY of the measures used. Yes, when you're talking about measuring performance for pay that's essentially the same thing as fairness, but sounds more scientific and less prone to inspiring complaints about "whiny" teachers.)
Wednesday, July 29, 2009
Imaginary Teachers
I was really into those teacher movies as a teenager, the ones where the Amazing Teacher turns the lives of downtrodden-yet-plucky youngsters who just need a little love (and generally the ruination of the teacher’s entire life) to succeed. Dead Poets’ Society, Mr. Holland’s Opus, Dangerous Minds, loved ‘em. They’re terribly unrealistic, though, and definitely not the direction I want my own teaching career to go. (I like a little emotional health, thank you.)
Teachers in children’s literature are a different breed than the Martyr Teacher of the movies. Here are a few of my favorites.
Miss Honey, Matilda by Roald Dahl
Miss Honey is perfect. She never raises her voice, quietly resists the evil Miss Trunchbull (seems like there’s always an evil teacher to balance the good one), and is the only one to recognize Matilda’s gifts. I adored a couple of my teachers the way that Matilda adores Miss Honey, but none of my teachers were that perfect. Thank goodness, since teachers have enough pressure on us as it is without trying to ascend to angelic status. (Matilda also has an opening that I absolutely love, especially on my meaner and more irritable days, when the narrator talks about what teachers would REALLY like to say in their report card comments.)
Miss Stacy, Anne of Green Gables by L.M. Montgomery
Another one of those bad-teacher/good-teacher situations, Miss Stacy replaces Mr. Phillips, who is harsh, hates Anne, and spends most of his time attempting to romance one of his older students. (Ewww.) Miss Stacy has her students going on nature walks and acting out battles (teaching with Multiple Intelligences before we knew about Multiple Intelligences!), which worries the good citizens of Avonlea. She’s all about the whole child. I have the feeling that Miss Stacy would not be a high-stakes standardized testing fan.
Ms. Finney,The Cat Ate My Gymsuit by Paula Danziger
Ms. Finney is a modern-day (well, 1970s) Miss Stacy, using unconventional methods to teach English and encouraging her kids to question authority (uh-oh). Main character Marcy, who hates just about everything, loves Ms. Finney and is one of the students who go to her defense when she loses her job due to her political views. Marcy is smart, sarcastic, overweight, and socially inept. Ms. Finney accepts her the way she is and helps her start on the way to liking herself as well as teaching her. I’ll never be as cool as Ms. Finney, but like her I want to be there for the Marcys in my classes. (I was a Marcy. Heck, I still am a Marcy.)
Mr. Carpenter, the Emily books by L.M. Montgomery
The trilogy starting with Emily of New Moon is one of L.M. Montgomery’s lesser-read series, but I actually prefer it to the Anne books. Mr. Carpenter is not the paragon that Miss Stacy is. He’s cynical, an alcoholic, a burned-out local prodigy who was expected to have a brilliant career but ended up "a country schoolteacher at forty-five with no prospect of being anything else." Emily is an aspiring writer, and the first time she takes him her writing, he thoroughly trashes most of it. He finds “ten good lines” out of the pile of stories and poems she gives him, and at first she is devastated, until he explains that ten good lines is an achievement at her age, and IF she keeps working, in ten years she'll be able to write a hundred. Emily walks away from that meeting with renewed determination to improve her writing and earn Mr. Carpenter’s respect, and that’s a better outcome than a series of smiley stickers and “Great job!” comments scrawled across student work could ever produce. Also, there's a great quote about his teaching style: "Mr. Carpenter never tried to keep order, apparently. But somehow he kept his students so busy that they had no time to do mischief."
The teachers in Harry Potter might deserve a post of their own, one of these days: Dumbedore, McGonagall, Lupin, Snape, Umbridge, Slughorn and the rest provide lots of food for thought!
Any other teachers in film, TV, or literature that have stuck with you, good or bad?
Teachers in children’s literature are a different breed than the Martyr Teacher of the movies. Here are a few of my favorites.
Miss Honey, Matilda by Roald Dahl
Miss Honey is perfect. She never raises her voice, quietly resists the evil Miss Trunchbull (seems like there’s always an evil teacher to balance the good one), and is the only one to recognize Matilda’s gifts. I adored a couple of my teachers the way that Matilda adores Miss Honey, but none of my teachers were that perfect. Thank goodness, since teachers have enough pressure on us as it is without trying to ascend to angelic status. (Matilda also has an opening that I absolutely love, especially on my meaner and more irritable days, when the narrator talks about what teachers would REALLY like to say in their report card comments.)
Miss Stacy, Anne of Green Gables by L.M. Montgomery
Another one of those bad-teacher/good-teacher situations, Miss Stacy replaces Mr. Phillips, who is harsh, hates Anne, and spends most of his time attempting to romance one of his older students. (Ewww.) Miss Stacy has her students going on nature walks and acting out battles (teaching with Multiple Intelligences before we knew about Multiple Intelligences!), which worries the good citizens of Avonlea. She’s all about the whole child. I have the feeling that Miss Stacy would not be a high-stakes standardized testing fan.
Ms. Finney,The Cat Ate My Gymsuit by Paula DanzigerMs. Finney is a modern-day (well, 1970s) Miss Stacy, using unconventional methods to teach English and encouraging her kids to question authority (uh-oh). Main character Marcy, who hates just about everything, loves Ms. Finney and is one of the students who go to her defense when she loses her job due to her political views. Marcy is smart, sarcastic, overweight, and socially inept. Ms. Finney accepts her the way she is and helps her start on the way to liking herself as well as teaching her. I’ll never be as cool as Ms. Finney, but like her I want to be there for the Marcys in my classes. (I was a Marcy. Heck, I still am a Marcy.)
Mr. Carpenter, the Emily books by L.M. Montgomery
The trilogy starting with Emily of New Moon is one of L.M. Montgomery’s lesser-read series, but I actually prefer it to the Anne books. Mr. Carpenter is not the paragon that Miss Stacy is. He’s cynical, an alcoholic, a burned-out local prodigy who was expected to have a brilliant career but ended up "a country schoolteacher at forty-five with no prospect of being anything else." Emily is an aspiring writer, and the first time she takes him her writing, he thoroughly trashes most of it. He finds “ten good lines” out of the pile of stories and poems she gives him, and at first she is devastated, until he explains that ten good lines is an achievement at her age, and IF she keeps working, in ten years she'll be able to write a hundred. Emily walks away from that meeting with renewed determination to improve her writing and earn Mr. Carpenter’s respect, and that’s a better outcome than a series of smiley stickers and “Great job!” comments scrawled across student work could ever produce. Also, there's a great quote about his teaching style: "Mr. Carpenter never tried to keep order, apparently. But somehow he kept his students so busy that they had no time to do mischief."
The teachers in Harry Potter might deserve a post of their own, one of these days: Dumbedore, McGonagall, Lupin, Snape, Umbridge, Slughorn and the rest provide lots of food for thought!
Any other teachers in film, TV, or literature that have stuck with you, good or bad?
Thursday, July 23, 2009
State writing test produces “Stepford Writers”
In Florida, 4th grade (which I taught for several years) is the Year of FCAT Writing. We spend months feverishly preparing our kids to prewrite, organize, draft, and revise a 4-5 paragraph essay, which must be on topic, descriptive, creative, and mechanically correct… in 45 minutes. Keep in mind that these little guys are NINE YEARS OLD.
Since the advent of the test (I was one of the first batch of test-takers, with the 8th grade version) teachers figured out that the easiest way to get high scores was to teach their kids formula writing. After all, some of our most creative and effective writers scored low on the test because they didn’t have a conclusion (too busy writing to notice that time was almost up) or because they panicked (no time for emotion-- this is FCAT!). So—make sure they get in elements A, B, and C (and D-M or so) and they’ll “pull a 4.” Creativity? Well, as long as they toss in few similes, some onomatopoeia… maybe they’ll get up to a 5. Creativity is a luxury during FCAT writing.
So it was no surprise to me when I saw this article about elementary schools being warned for teaching their kids… formula writing.
Guess what? Teachers often have lists of descriptive and organizational phrases kids can use. Often these are generated by the kids themselves and stay up on the board all year, being added to when some comes up with a new one. We take them down during the tests, of course. However, they provide a quick mental shorthand for test-stressed kids—“I ran…” (insert remembered simile here) “as fast as wildfire!” Are you going to penalize kids for using clichés? Maybe the teachers at these schools went a little too far with this, although clearly not far enough to warrant anything more than a hand-slap and some embarrassing press.
What surprised me was that the Education Deparment was shocked, SHOCKED to find out that kids were being taught “template writing” (which, by the way, is not the same thing as a bunch of kids using the same simile or concluding phrase.)
So using a phrase like “Now you can clearly see” means that the student’s writing isn’t original? What, and using “in conclusion” or “to summarize” instead would have been original? The Education Department wouldn’t have cared if there was just a tad more variation (translation: teachers, make your phrase lists longer). FCAT writing has been producing “Stepford Writers” for fifteen years with no sign of stopping. Moreover, it’s producing Stepford Writers who HATE TO WRITE.
If we want a test with any kind of authenticity, let’s allow the kids to pick their topics. Even a choice of two or three would be better than none. Let’s give them more time, maybe two hours or even stretch the test over two days the way some states do. Let’s honor our students’ different learning and processing styles by giving them time to reflect and revise.
More than that, let’s bring down the stakes, so teachers can spend time on something other than FCAT during their writing instruction. Let’s allow 4th grade and 8th grade and 10th grade students to do REAL WRITING, in multiple stages, the way most of us did in school and the way we teachers were taught to in our education classes. Let’s revive the lost art of the Final Draft. Let’s give our kids time to savor and enjoy writing again.
Until that happens, Florida Education Department, don’t pretend surprise when kids churn out formulaic writing.
Since the advent of the test (I was one of the first batch of test-takers, with the 8th grade version) teachers figured out that the easiest way to get high scores was to teach their kids formula writing. After all, some of our most creative and effective writers scored low on the test because they didn’t have a conclusion (too busy writing to notice that time was almost up) or because they panicked (no time for emotion-- this is FCAT!). So—make sure they get in elements A, B, and C (and D-M or so) and they’ll “pull a 4.” Creativity? Well, as long as they toss in few similes, some onomatopoeia… maybe they’ll get up to a 5. Creativity is a luxury during FCAT writing.
So it was no surprise to me when I saw this article about elementary schools being warned for teaching their kids… formula writing.
PALM BEACH COUNTY - The same phrases kept appearing on FCAT essays by numerous fourth-graders in Palm Beach, Broward and 10 other county school districts: "I ran as fast as wild fire," "Poof!", "In the blink of an eye," and "Now you can clearly see" are just a few of the common word choices noticed by scorers this year.
Guess what? Teachers often have lists of descriptive and organizational phrases kids can use. Often these are generated by the kids themselves and stay up on the board all year, being added to when some comes up with a new one. We take them down during the tests, of course. However, they provide a quick mental shorthand for test-stressed kids—“I ran…” (insert remembered simile here) “as fast as wildfire!” Are you going to penalize kids for using clichés? Maybe the teachers at these schools went a little too far with this, although clearly not far enough to warrant anything more than a hand-slap and some embarrassing press.
What surprised me was that the Education Deparment was shocked, SHOCKED to find out that kids were being taught “template writing” (which, by the way, is not the same thing as a bunch of kids using the same simile or concluding phrase.)
In a November analysis from the state Education Department . . . cited the danger that students would become "Stepford Writers. They may look like writers, act like writers, think they're writers, but they are really task completers -- practicing for FCAT Writing."
So using a phrase like “Now you can clearly see” means that the student’s writing isn’t original? What, and using “in conclusion” or “to summarize” instead would have been original? The Education Department wouldn’t have cared if there was just a tad more variation (translation: teachers, make your phrase lists longer). FCAT writing has been producing “Stepford Writers” for fifteen years with no sign of stopping. Moreover, it’s producing Stepford Writers who HATE TO WRITE.
If we want a test with any kind of authenticity, let’s allow the kids to pick their topics. Even a choice of two or three would be better than none. Let’s give them more time, maybe two hours or even stretch the test over two days the way some states do. Let’s honor our students’ different learning and processing styles by giving them time to reflect and revise.
More than that, let’s bring down the stakes, so teachers can spend time on something other than FCAT during their writing instruction. Let’s allow 4th grade and 8th grade and 10th grade students to do REAL WRITING, in multiple stages, the way most of us did in school and the way we teachers were taught to in our education classes. Let’s revive the lost art of the Final Draft. Let’s give our kids time to savor and enjoy writing again.
Until that happens, Florida Education Department, don’t pretend surprise when kids churn out formulaic writing.
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